I really like the way keywords came in after the other text! It is a nice way to use animation to emphasize meaning!
I strongly suggest using instrumental music. The lyrics diminish the power of the words and animation alone. Music should be used to set the mood or tone.
Your Illuminated text made me think about.... pulling out keywords and bringing them into the frame after the others. That really makes them stand out.
You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... I would embed your video into your blog. The slides went a little too fast for me to be able to read all the words.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is.... I liked the text and how the last word in the line became the first word in the next line. I also, liked how you changed "watch" on every slide.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....mu own actions and how they affect others. You should consider changing/adding/taking out.... have instrumental music. What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....the emphasis on the word WATCH and all of the different animations you did with it.
Your Illuminated text made me think about I should really watch what I say sometimes. You should consider music that doesn't sound chopped off at the end. I was wondering how to fade music, so I added a last slide that was a repeat of the first slide, so people would know it's over and the music doesn't cut off. I didn't mind the lyrics on yours, though. I liked how it set the speed of the slides. What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how you chose your key words and when and how they appeared. I liked the consistency from slide to slide in that sense but the variation in color and other measures were good.
I thought of an inspirational speech I would share with my students at the beginning of school. I would consider changing the song or making the graphics flow more with the song. I liked the poem you chose.
I really like the way keywords came in after the other text! It is a nice way to use animation to emphasize meaning!
ReplyDeleteI strongly suggest using instrumental music. The lyrics diminish the power of the words and animation alone. Music should be used to set the mood or tone.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....
ReplyDeletepulling out keywords and bringing them into the frame after the others. That really makes them stand out.
You should consider changing/adding/taking out....
I would embed your video into your blog. The slides went a little too fast for me to be able to read all the words.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....
I liked the text and how the last word in the line became the first word in the next line. I also, liked how you changed "watch" on every slide.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....mu own actions and how they affect others.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider changing/adding/taking out.... have instrumental music.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....the emphasis on the word WATCH and all of the different animations you did with it.
Your Illuminated text made me think about....
ReplyDeleteho much I love the song you used!
You should consider changing/adding/taking out....
I love the song - but maybe get a karaoke version
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is....
I liked that the words came after the sentence - it was really cool to watch
Your Illuminated text made me think about I should really watch what I say sometimes.
ReplyDeleteYou should consider music that doesn't sound chopped off at the end. I was wondering how to fade music, so I added a last slide that was a repeat of the first slide, so people would know it's over and the music doesn't cut off. I didn't mind the lyrics on yours, though. I liked how it set the speed of the slides.
What I like best about your Illuminated Text is how you chose your key words and when and how they appeared. I liked the consistency from slide to slide in that sense but the variation in color and other measures were good.
I thought of an inspirational speech I would share with my students at the beginning of school.
ReplyDeleteI would consider changing the song or making the graphics flow more with the song.
I liked the poem you chose.